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Question Details: Author: Jeremy M. Wiley
Cyborg
Chapter 1
The day I lost my humanity

The day I lost my humanity was like most other days. I was just a regular black kid going to school and coming back. I didn’t have any idea what was going to happen to me that day………………………..
“Mom I’m going to school!” I screamed, notifying her that I was going to school.
“Ok honey be careful and don’t act a fool at school.” She said. I was 17 years old in my last year of high school. I was a good student, I got my grades and I played sports too. Life was fun for me, except for one thing. I lived on the wrong side of California, and with all of the gangs, drugs, and criminal activities going on down here. I had a lot to influence me. But I couldn’t do that to my mom; she was the only thing I had left. I stood their waiting at the bus stop. A car drove by blasting music. The windows were tinted so I couldn’t tell who was in the car. The car stopped in front of me I started to run but a familiar face looked out of the window. Smoke arose out the window hitting my nose like a train. The smell was potent it agitated my nose.
“What up my man?” It was my cousin Drew, he was no good. He called himself a gangster and followed that life style. Me and him broke ties a long time ago.
“Nothing much, I’m just waiting to go to school.” I said.
“Man come ride with me.” He asked.
“What? I got school man.” I said to him.
“What? The Calvin I used to know would kill to run with me.” Drew informed.
“Well the “Calvin” you used to know has changed.” I said.
“Aight then lil cuz go get yo education.” He said laughing as he drove off. Shortly after my confrontation with Drew, the bus came and I went to school. I reported to first period class. I took my seat in the class room as class started.
“Good morning seniors.” Mrs. Lain address the class. “Well if you didn’t know there are only 3 weeks of school left and you are set for the rest of your life. These last 3 weeks are going to be hardcore math so please pull out your books please.” The classed disapproved with facial expressions and remarks.
“Man I ain’t doing this shit.” One of my classmates said.
“Mr. Darin would please respect me and close your mouth!” She screamed at him.
“What? Bitch you don’t tell me what to do!” He got up and walked toward her. I got up in front of him.
“Man just chill and sit down it ain’t even that serious.” I said as I put my hand on his chest.
“Get your damn hand off of me.” He said as he moved my hand away roughly and pushed me extremely hard. I recoiled, by grabbing him by his collar and slammed his head onto the desk.
“Do you really want this problem?” I asked him in his ear. He didn’t say anything. I let him go. He stared at me for the longest.
“Yo this shit ain’t over bitch nigga!” He said as he walked out.
“Well that was very brave Mr. Johnson I will make sure he is wrote up and dealt with.” She said.
“No problem Mrs. Lain.” I said. School went by fast and I went to the gym as I usually do to workout and train for boxing.

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“C’mon Calvin hit me with your best shot.” Joe screamed. I hit the two pads on his hand continuously. Joe was my boxing coach and my mentor, I loved boxing. I always liked to box because it is fun and kept me in shape.
“Good! Now give me a right hook!” He ordered. I executed a right hook. “That’s what I’m talking about!” Joe took the pads off of his hands. “Practice is over for today it’s getting late.” He said as he looked at his watch. “Matter of fact its dark outside you better get home before Mrs. Johnson has a fit.”
“Yes sir.” I said.
“Don’t forget you got a big boxing match Saturday.” He told me I left out of the gym. I started to walk home. Vrooooom!!!! A car engine revved. I turned around. Bright car lights shined in my eyes. The car was about a block away from me. I paid it no attention and continue to walk home. I heard tires screech the car took off. I turned around again noticing that the car was coming after me. I spilt, running fast as I could. I dashed through yards, onto porches and even I jumped fences. Who could this be chasing me I haven’t done nothing to nobody. But then again people around here didn’t need a reason. I finally ran out in the open street dashing home. I didn’t see the car anymore I thought I had got away. I stood their panting I was exhausted from all of the running. The car swerved around the block. I instantly began to run. POW!!!!! POW!!!!!! POW!!!!!!!!! Multiple gun shots were fired. All I can remember was my legs just giving out. My face slammed into the concrete. Blood had spilled on the street. Agonizing pain surged through my legs. I resorted to crawling. The car stopped beside me. A car door slammed. A foot blocked my vision. I slowly looked up.
“I told you I was gonna get you didn’t? Look at you. Yo punkass can’t even move.” Darin said. He pulled his bandana down from his mouth revealing himself. “Go to hell Calvin.” I turned away. He put
this part was cut out.
He put the pistol close to my face. POW!!!! POW!!!!! POW!!!!! POW!!!!!! I was thought I was dead. My entire life flashed before me. I just knew it was the end. Somehow I remained alive. I blanked out. I woke up in a hospital bed. Amazingly I was still alive but I couldn’t move or say a word. The only thing I could do was listen. I listened to the people conversing over me.
“Yes his physical statue is perfect. He will be a great test subject.” I heard a man’s voice but I couldn’t see him.
“No this is a human being, he is not meant to be some prototype!” Another voice spoke.
“You are under me! I want this boy in the test subject room and you testing on him!” The man shouted.
“Yes sir.” The other man replied. i tried to move but it was no use.
@breezyleeme thanx

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Favorite Answer:

Answer by breezyleeme
I think it is really visual. I could see everything in my head. I pictured gangsters and the hood.
I like Calvin! I'm glad he lived through it.
Oh, gosh..wtf he is going to be tested on! This makes me want to know more about the people who have him trapped and what they are going to do to him.

It's chapter one...are you going to continue with the story?

I hope you do.

Nice job!

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